Blog 2/3
Now, let’s
get back to me present day. I’m having
these weird dreams about this prisoner… 56-412. All the prisoner is doing is
sleeping and eating. There is a report file, I open it and it has previous
recordings… it looks like people have been doing this for a couple of days now.
For all I know I could be recording 56-412 for a few days or even months… its
whatever the SAT government wants me to do. So, I start watching the prisoner
with my hands hovering the keys on the computer. 56-412 finally moves, but only
to roll over... I never thought this would be so boring. I start copying how
he/she breathes, there is data that says if start kind of acting like the
prisoners do it helps understand and record them. I stay up so late that night
studying the prisoner and trying to wait for my life to truly begin... I then close
my eyes. I wake up to my mom asking me if I want to look at old scrapbooks of
Ava’s friends and memories… the doctor said it will help me try to remember
things since I have long term Amnesia. After looking at the scrapbooks for a
couple of days, Mrs. Hanson asks me if I want to go to school. If I didn’t want
to go then a group of special doctors at the university hospital wanted to see
me. So, knowing me I chose school, and Ava’s mom was so happy… she said something
about ‘they’ wanting to see me. I replied, “Who?”, she then sadly blinks and
says “Yours friend’s”. I don’t remember but she shows me a scrapbook that says,
“BFF’S FOR LIFE”, she then opens the scrapbook and shows me three other girls…their
names are Olivia, Greer, and Sophie. I don’t remember them for my life…
Scott, Elizabeth. As I wake. Vol. 5-15, Penguin Group (USA),
2012.
Nicely shared. Read your writing out loud whenever you can. It helps a writer hear the musicality of the writing. Good writing should be articulate - the next challenge is to make writing that sounds beautiful as well. Strive for musicality in your writing. Visit the website and read insight #4: http://www.hughhowey.com/writing-insights-part-one-becoming-a-writer/
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